Assignment 3 Question 2

2. In a previous assignment, you wrote an introduction article in the “F” pattern. Based on what we discussed in class and based on the feedback provided in class, write a new introductory “content” incorporating “plain English writing for the web” in the “F” pattern including visuals. You are to include your “revised version” (if the version you submitted was not in the F-Pattern). Ensure that it addresses the three main objectives of plain English writing. As a reminder, this is an introductory post for your business. Ensure you list it in your hardcopy. (12 Marks)

Old Version of the Introductory Post from Assignment #1

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Welcome to From the Rack!

This is a website to browse thrifted clothes, a place to gain knowledge, and a hub for everything fashionable. We are more then just a place to shop for clothes though: From The Rack Windsor is an inclusive website that loves our community – posting fit checks, fashion inspo, and clothes to upgrade your wardrobe. We take pride in making sure everything uploaded to the website is done with care, from our clothes being deep cleaned and steamed to our posts, we make sure we are giving you the best quality content possible.

What will you gain from shopping here?

• New exciting pieces of history
• Free stickers with every order
• Free shipping for orders over 50 dollars
• helpful information on local Windsor locations to take pictures at
• A free Spotify playlist personalized to the piece of clothing you are buying

Quality you can trust

At From The Rack, quality is our top priority. Every item is perfectly curated for our website, ensuring that it meets our high standards, we triple check every item to make sure that there isn’t any stains or holes. From our Sweaters to our pants you can shop with confidence knowing that every piece has been thoroughly inspected and packaged with care.

Join the community

From The Rack isn’t just a store—it’s a community of like-minded fashion forward individuals who all share a passion for high quality thrifted finds and sustainable living. Joining our community with just your email will connect you to hundreds of other individuals just like you! You will also receive discounts and other promotional content that will help you on your fashion journey.

Ready to start browsing?

Ready to start finding your staple piece? Browse our online store, explore our curated collections, or discover fashion tips and local locations through our blogs. Whether you are shopping for yourself or searching for that perfect gift , From The Rack has you covered. Welcome to the hub of thrifted fashion—welcome to From The Rack.

New Revised Version with Plain Language Writing and Improved F-Pattern

Welcome To From The Rack: Your new favourite place to buy vintage clothes

Explore Fashionable Pieces with a Story

At From The Rack, we’re more than just a store. We’re a vibrant community passionate about thrift fashion, including others and sustainability. Dive into our curated collections to find unique pieces that speak to you personally.

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What You Gain From Shopping Here

• Discover Exciting Vintage Finds: Each item we collect for you comes with its history and charm, adding a unique touch to your wardrobe.

• Free Stickers: Get a free sticker with every order – because who doesn’t love a little extra flair?

• Free Shipping: Enjoy free shipping on orders over $50, making your thrift finds from the rack even more affordable.

• Local Photoshoot locations: Find out the best spots in Windsor for stunning fashion photoshoots.

• Personalized Spotify Playlists: Receive a Spotify playlist tailored to your purchased clothing item, adding a musical touch to your style journey.

Quality You Can Trust

Our commitment to quality means you can shop with confidence. Every item we source undergoes a 5-step inspection to ensure it meets our high standards. No stains, no holes-just carefully sourced pieces to elevate your wardrobe.

Join Our Fashion-Forward Community

Join our community to connect with like-minded individuals. By signing up with your email, you can unlock a 10% discount on your first order, exclusive content, and a supportive network of fashion enthusiasts.

Ready to Start Browsing?

Explore our online store, check out our curated collection, or dive into our fashion blogs for tips and inspiration. Whether shopping for yourself or searching for the perfect gift, From The Rack has everything you need to upgrade your wardrobe.